Titlul cred ca e ales putin cam aiurea. Okay.. storm storm.. chiar se vede in thumb dar in deviatia mare as spune ca un.. err.. "The day the sky leaked" ar fi fost mai potrivit.
Cuz.. nu prea seamana cu o furtuna ci mai degraba cu.. o scena scifi (pe care nu o gasesc acum) sau un oras industrial cu o mega uzina in mijloc (sau chiar un mega foc in mijlocul orasului). Mai ales ca pe centrul furtunii nu se vad urmele de spirala chiar atat de bine (care sa dea impresia ca urca sau coboara) >_>
La baza tornadei sunt iar cateva probleme.. in special pentru ca e blurry si nu se mai nimic acolo. Mergea sa arunci cateva ramasite de cladiri adunate sau eu stiu.. ceva mini explozii pe langa.
Partea de jos e de nota 10 (orasul) dar in partea superioara parca e alta deviatie. Poate ar fi trebuit sa te mai joci putin la culori, sa-i dai o tenta rosiatica (u kno.. apocalyptic and stuff) si sa creezi si un drum pentru tornada (din nou cu cladiri lasate in ruine.. si alte chestii).
Dar daca las ochiul critic (pe care si asa nu prea il am) e o deviatie foarte buna. Daca mai faci cateva modificari minore (poate la sa pastrezi ideile pentru o opera viitoare) thumbs up
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It's the courage to go forth into the darkness, face your fears, find your heart, find light where you thought were shadows of your dream.
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It's the courage to go forth into the darkness, face your fears, find your heart, find light where you thought were shadows of your dream.
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...i can't see nothing wrong in being melancolic...is a positive thing..is not depression,is a feeling of passion...
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Titlul cred ca e ales putin cam aiurea. Okay.. storm storm.. chiar se vede in thumb dar in deviatia mare as spune ca un.. err.. "The day the sky leaked" ar fi fost mai potrivit.
Cuz.. nu prea seamana cu o furtuna ci mai degraba cu.. o scena scifi (pe care nu o gasesc acum) sau un oras industrial cu o mega uzina in mijloc
La baza tornadei sunt iar cateva probleme.. in special pentru ca e blurry si nu se mai nimic acolo. Mergea sa arunci cateva ramasite de cladiri adunate sau eu stiu.. ceva mini explozii pe langa.
Partea de jos e de nota 10 (orasul) dar in partea superioara parca e alta deviatie. Poate ar fi trebuit sa te mai joci putin la culori, sa-i dai o tenta rosiatica (u kno.. apocalyptic and stuff) si sa creezi si un drum pentru tornada (din nou cu cladiri lasate in ruine.. si alte chestii).
Dar daca las ochiul critic (pe care si asa nu prea il am) e o deviatie foarte buna. Daca mai faci cateva modificari minore (poate la sa pastrezi ideile pentru o opera viitoare) thumbs up
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Roses are #FF0000
Violets are #0000FF
Hex loves you
And I do too
nah..just kiddin..I hate you all
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Roses are #FF0000
Violets are #0000FF
Hex loves you
And I do too
nah..just kiddin..I hate you all
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